I've been playing around with ideas for my tag line and blurb for my up and coming book, Revenge in Rio (with the lovely Beachwalk Press) and would love your thoughts on it so far. The blurb is allowed to be up to 250 words, so I'm good at the moment. Does it grip you? Would you want to read it? Too wordy/not enough words? Does it flow? Make sense? I'm open to all suggestions and would love any feedback. Cheers muchly! :-)
Calculated revenge, unexpected passion…
Business magnate, Luca Venancio is returning to Rio for two reasons; to pay his respects to his late brother, and to have his once fiancé, Daniella, in his bed. Call it revenge, if you will. Nothing more and nothing less. She left him without so much as a word five years ago; shunning him and the rich life he could offer, all in exchange for his younger, reckless brother.
Blackmailed into a violent, and farce of a marriage, Daniella had no choice but to comply to protect Luca’s life; even if it did mean never being able to see him again. But five years later, a twist of fate unexpectedly reunites them both, and throws her plans of fleeing Rio well and truly out of the window and the love of her life straight back in.
Luca’s flawless plan soon becomes complicated when he discovers Daniella is expecting his brother’s child in a matter of weeks… can he really go through with seducing her, bedding her and then discarding her? And will it result in more heartache for Daniella as a result of his vindictive games?